January 15th 2008
Make ‘em Laugh
When I was at Wiscon last May, I attended a panel on High Fantasy (or epic fantasy, or quest fantasy, or whatever you want to call it) where the panelists ended up spending a good portion of their time on humor. Not enough of it in High Fantasy, they decided, and I couldn’t agree more.
I’m not just talking wit, here. I’m talking buffoons and drunks and lackeys falling down stairs. Anything to lighten the tone. To provide a contrast for The Great Deeds Yet To Come.
I try to put a bit of humor into all my books, especially at the beginning. What do other folks do? Who are the best writers out there today when it comes to adding a little lightheartedness to the quest to Save The World?
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1. Karen Wester Newton on Jan 15th, 2008 at 4:25 pm
Believe it or not, it always seemed to me that broad, slapstick humor was harder to do in written form than subtle, witty repartee. I think that’s because it can be difficult to get the reader to see exactly what you want him/her to see.
Now, in a play or movie, broad humor is practically a gimme– witness the way people laugh at “funny” videos of people doing serious injury to themselves on TV.
2. Diana Pharaoh Francis on Jan 15th, 2008 at 6:35 pm
I go with rude snark. It amuses me anyhow. If I could write His Girl Friday as a fantasy, I would.
Di
3. S.C. Butler on Jan 15th, 2008 at 7:30 pm
Karen - You’re right. It takes a lot of description to get broad humor right on the page. But sometimes, if you get the characters right…
Diana - If you write His Girl Friday as a fantasy, I will certainly read it.
4. Kate Elliott on Jan 16th, 2008 at 3:05 am
Di, oh, you must write it. Please.
5. Marie Brennan on Jan 16th, 2008 at 3:37 am
I’m often not a fan of Humor as such — the kind of thing that passes for comedy in America these days. But I loves me some wit.
As far as including either kind in High Fantasy goes, I don’t remember if this is something Joss Whedon actually said or just demonstrated in Buffy and his other projects, but real people simply aren’t serious all the time. Even when things are awful, people make jokes, people make humorous mistakes. Trying to play everything at a serious pitch is a mistake; without the contrast, that just gets wearing.
6. S.C. Butler on Jan 16th, 2008 at 9:27 am
Marie - I think you’ve hit the nail on the head (unless you missed and hit your thumb).
7. Simon Haynes on Jan 16th, 2008 at 11:11 pm
Yes, you could say I put humour in my books…
8. cyn on Jan 17th, 2008 at 7:45 pm
i feel that humor is very difficult to write.
i am, in person, a pretty funny femme.
but my first novel didn’t come out like that.
i did add a sidekick and he has some great
lines, so i think he added to the light
heartedness of a rather serious tale.
it sort of surprises me how your outwardly
personality may not match what you are
prone to write. my good friend still expects
me to write a comedic screenplay for her
to direct, she thinks i’m *that* funny.
but my humor is using others
and myself to make
the situation funny. making a situation funny
with words is a different story. literally.
9. s.c. butler on Jan 19th, 2008 at 12:28 pm
cyn - it is interesting the way some people are really funny in person but don’t put their homor into their books. Often it’s because they don’t want to.
10. cyn on Jan 20th, 2008 at 12:27 pm
s.c. — i’m def willing to try, when it’s appropriate.
i worried my novel was over serious.
consider this line from my sidekick :
“and the next thing i knew, there was a monster
between my legs!”
a snake demoness at that!
okay, maybe only i find that funny. haha! =X